Is a pulsing story book croped/crammed in half
This is like half a pulsating story book. The camera felt too zoomed in the whole way through and was like 10 seconds fixed in this position and 10 seconds in that position. I felt claustrophobic by the end... What your doing here makes it just no fun to watch. Directing the audience to focus on the right part is a challenge in your style but very important. You failed at directing my attention entirely in a couple places which makes the actions confusing. Your style on its own is hard for me to watch without feeling queasy don't complicate it by excessively zoomed in shots and lack of directing attention or natural feeling transitions. Finally I think the repetitive beat of the music made the repetitive flipping to the next scene that much harder to watch.