NitrogenousBeing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

not entertaining enough

Yeah... typography is not something I find enjoyable to watch. I am disappointed you didn't animate something more interesting... There are much funnier/crazier reviews out there and I thought this one was dull.

RicePirate responds:

I didn't pick the review. I picked the audio track :) which apparently, a good number of folks have found entertaining. Not entertaining enough for you, perhaps, but then, I guess I didn't make this one for you... I suppose, in some very obvious way, I made this for the people that would enjoy it :)

[The Last Man on Earth]

good holiday message

This is another reason why everyone should know the basics of human cloning.
Lol sorry just had to add my strange point of view on this flash.

Dunso responds:

Glad you liked it!

[Chef]

oh hai

Short and funny but it just felt too simple to me. Sound effects were great and the omelet was mesmerizing to watch. This is the best thing you have made yet that I can remember off the top of my head tho good job. I thought the crazy no smoking flash was a more interesting concept tho and was the reason I remember you.

DrpOpZ responds:

I'm glad you've enjoyed the FX, i try to give as much attention as i can to audio editing.
I'm even more happy to hear "i remember you from the crazy no smoking flash".
About being simple, i just wanted to add a light non-splatter and (for what i can do) original punchline to my collection.
More complex stuff should be coming later on anyway ;)

Thanks for the review!

['Seasons']

I'm getting a feeling of.... and its gone.

N-Scores:
Visual Score 65 B
Audio Score 57 B
Story Score 42 C-
Appeal Score 60 B-
Originality Score 45 C-
Authorship Score 55 C+
Epic Coefficient 20
(Scoring made adding up 24 scores (not shown) which I assigned to your flash. The average non spam flash movie should score about 50 in every category except epic which should be 0 if there is nothing above average about it.)

I think that this is soothing and artistic but too short so that u loose the feeling just as you start to become immersed and you even seem to only get through the intro of the music too.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Wasn't meant to be anything big. Just a little experiment about flying through all the seasons.
Thanks for the review :)

[Green Skies episode 2]

wth I almost missed the action scenes

What in the world were you thinking when you made such a long text and blank pause between the intro and the action I thought the intro was the whole episode and the text was the end credits. I wouldn't have noticed the action after it if I hadn't left the window open to do something else.I advise shortening the action-less pauses cause the pacing is all weird. Also this would benefit from clearer audio.

RPRMT0054611 responds:

points taken. there's supposed to be a "conversation" in the rolling text part. (points finger at lazy partner who never turned up the other voices) but i'll try to improve on this come episode 3.

[one mighty tasty brain]

yay

Lol did I see just see Brook? Nice use of new-grounds authors and characters. I found this flash to be enjoyable.

Olzone responds:

yeah you just saw brooke.
thank you. your welcome
i find your review short but enyojable

[Hardknock Life]

Nice

It is nice to see someone make their own music with their flash. I'd like to suggest that when you make a character bounce they should stretch and flatten to make it look more realistic Also moving the camera and using different angles would help to make things more interesting. There are action-script cameras to be had somewhere on the internet that may help somehow. good job.

Popoki responds:

Thanks for the tips, I really appreciate it. I am going to take your kind advice to strech and flatten a bit more the next time I use a hyperactive little gooseball in my videos ;o) and also I was thinking about having a moving camera in the end when the idea first popped up in my head but as I said in the description this was my first flash I have ever made and I have only been working on it for a few days so I will keep that in mind for another time :o)

['Kite']

Sweet

This is really great work here. I really enjoyed the choice of colors and line-less style. Lol if only birds behaved like that flying a kite would be more amusing.

Pierson responds:

Thanks for your kind words! yeah the line-less style was abit of a pain to animate but animation shouldnt be easy I guess!