NitrogenousBeing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bipedal cavalry automaton]

I like it but something is off... ready I am going to pretend I know something about art now: This isn't as interesting as it should be because there is a lack of action. I receive no sense of motion when I look at this yet there are indications that there should be motion. The drawing is a little to straight. Momentum should affect the rider more, especially because the riders face is the focal point of the drawing. I would also love to see more flying dirt or footprints and a shadow maybe something in the foreground to make him seem more like his bca/ro is not floating on a light mist 10 arbitrary units from the ground.

kmau responds:

I agree, the rider should be more bent over and clench his legs against the chasis.

[Shut-In]

Ahhh nooooo. This looks so right then, when you look closer, it looks so wrong. Gah way to play tricks on our brains. Even with all the strange details the image still looks so cute. Nice one.

TheSillyStoic responds:

Thanks for the review :D